These are the lyrics to my song, and I have added in some of the basic script annotations that I first did.
If someone stood up in a crowd
And raised their voice up way out loud
And waved their arm and shook his leg
You'd notice him (Spoken)
And raised their voice up way out loud
And waved their arm and shook his leg
You'd notice him (Spoken)
If someone in the movie show
Yelled, "Fire", in the second row
This whole place is a powder keg (Screamed towards audience)
You'd notice him (Spoken)
Yelled, "Fire", in the second row
This whole place is a powder keg (Screamed towards audience)
You'd notice him (Spoken)
And even without clucking like a hen
Everyone gets noticed, now and then
Unless of course, that personage should be
Invisible, inconsequential me
Everyone gets noticed, now and then
Unless of course, that personage should be
Invisible, inconsequential me
Cellophane, Mr. Cellophane shoulda been my name
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
I tell ya Cellophane, Mr. Cellophane shoulda been my name
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
Suppose you was a little cat
Residin' in a person's flat
Who fed you fish and scratched your ears?
You'd notice him
Residin' in a person's flat
Who fed you fish and scratched your ears?
You'd notice him
Suppose you was a woman, wed
And sleepin' in a double bed
Beside one man, for seven years
You'd notice him
And sleepin' in a double bed
Beside one man, for seven years
You'd notice him
A human being's made of more than air
With all that bulk, you're bound to see him there
Unless that human bein' next to you
Is unimpressive, undistinguished you know who
With all that bulk, you're bound to see him there
Unless that human bein' next to you
Is unimpressive, undistinguished you know who
Cellophane, Mr. Cellophane shoulda been my name
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
I tell ya Cellophane, Mr. Cellophane shoulda been my name
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
Never even know(Break down into tear at the end of note) I'm there
Mr. Cellophane 'cause you can look right through me
Walk right by me and never know I'm there
Never even know(Break down into tear at the end of note) I'm there
Hope I didn't take up too much of your time (Walking off stage)
Before starting to block out my solo properly I did some research into past performances of the song and some different versions out there. One of the main versions that I have been looking at is the one from the film adaption of Chicago. This version is very different to some of the others where the actor, speaks a lot of the lyrics instead of singing some of the verses. I thought that this sounded good, but I thought that I will use this style of the song, if ever I felt that I was loosing the melody in the song, or the timing went to fast or solo. This also gives me the opportunity to add some more emotion to the lyrics, without having to focus on the notes and being in tune
The second version of the song that I listened to was the one from the Broadway version of the musical. I could automatically see differences between the two versions, as the one from the production, the whole thing is sung along to the melody. I felt this hard to sing as I am so familiar with the movie version that it didn't come naturally to me. How ever I liked the movement in this song. I thought that the subtle hand movements and the animated facial expressions made the song come to life and I could see my self interacting with the audience while doing these movements, and it reminded me a bit of a clown.
27th April 2015
This was my first rehearsal where I began to sing the song properly, rather than just doing it half hearted and blocking it out. I had a session with the singing teacher Kim, which I arranged to make sure that I was singing the song in tune and to give me some technique on the projection of certain sections. One note that I was given was to really push the whole song, and give it full energy or the pace and feel of the song drops. I felt that I was holding back some of the song, and I was pushing some bits, but was keeping most of it in, as I didn't want to go to far with it, and lose my intonation and pitching. However I ran the song a couple of times on this day and felt that if I pushed my notes further and gave the song a lot of energy it came to life and I got in the roll of it and it seemed to all work out.
Kim said that with the song as a whole the majority of the song was in tune and that I had control of the song and was getting most the notes right and had good tone. There is one line in the song that I wasn't sure about, going into the rehearsal. This is the last line of the song "Never Even Know" This gets very high, and I think it helped a lot having someone else there that I could pitch my notes against and then I could tell that I was hitting it. This note is fairly high, and I wouldn't say that it is in my comfortable range, but I was able to hit it a couple of times in the song.
I left this first rehearsal with the target to keep singing the song along with the vocals on the videos, then I could pitch my note against him and try to memorise what it is like to hit these notes and how I have to prepare myself.
1st May 2015
I had some spare time in the day I spent this in the theatre, going over my song with my self, mainly focusing on that last note at the end of the song that I had been struggling with. I had been hitting this note on a more regular basis, but still couldn't find something in my preparation that I felt made me do it. The two words before the high note, go down a note half way through the word. I then started to visualise myself using these two words as a ladder, and I was pulling my self up the notes on these two words, then giving I big final push up on the last word with the high note. This really is helping me to hit that note and now it is not becoming a problem in this song.
2nd/3rd May 2015
Over the weekend I sat down and started to think about my act, and how I can really make it really different to any other performances of this song. I went through different ways that I could change the themes of the song and add a different story behind it. One theme that stood out for me was clowns. so I came up with a background story about a clown that is a bit of a failure and nobody finds him funny or entertaining. I think that worked well with the lyrics of the song, about how no one knows he is even there, and there is no point of him being there, I could see a lot of possibility's in this, trying to get sympathy from the audience yet having the comedy element of the clown that I really over animated.
4th May 2015
In this lesson we got the chance to do some independent rehearsals, I took this as I chance to go through my choreography, I think that by keeping it very simple and just doing most of it on the spot and doing what ever comes natural with make the emotion of anger and depression come across. where as I feel that the a tight movement would restrict what I do and my character journey. During the act I really work the audience and get very close and personal with them. this make it very close and really real for them. I think this sticks to the clowning theme, as clowns break the fourth wall between a audience and the performer. I do this by direct lines and eye contact.
12th May 2015
In this lesson we were planning to do a run of everyone in the classes acts, I felt really confident about doing this as I felt that I already had a strong and confident act to show, that showed clearly what I wanted to show and my character. At the start of lesson we went through technical elements and were told what was available to us in the theatre. I went into this, with a understanding of what was available and what I wanted in my act.
I tried to keep my act to a small amount of lighting ques, as I didn't want there to be too much happening and become a distraction. My first que is a spot light at the back of the stage that will light me sitting at the table, applying my clown makeup and that is where I will do my dialogue. This is a fairly big spot at the back, so it wont restrict my movements to much at the start. I will also be using a radio mic, so I can do what movements I want.
My second que is the lighting state to go up to a general wash at the front of the stage, this will go up as the start of the singing section, this gives me lots of room on the stage to move around and work the audience. I then have a sharp blackout at the end of the song when I exit. I think that this is a good amount of ques and its doesn't have some much that It is constantly changing but there is some change to differentiate between the two areas and styles. If I was aloud any lighting I would have a follow spot for the whole show, I think that this would look like I was performing to a audience that wasn't there if I was the only one lit.
At the end of this lesson we showed our acts to the class. My performance went really well I thought. I do however feel that I held back some of the comedy elements as I wanted to leave these to the last performance, as they may not have the same effect over and over again. but I got some really positive feedback, about how my audience interaction worked and I really drew the audience into the characters story and made them feel sorry for me, yet still in positive way. I lost some of the timings in the song during some of the verses, so my target over the next week before the show is to go over the song a lot to get the timing down and link some of my movements to the timings of the song.
14th May 2015
We were given another independent rehearsal lesson, and now that I am really confident with the song and my notes and I have a good range of movements to put the performance, I wanted to come up with some dialogue to go with my performance at the start. The backing track that I am using has I bit of overture at the start that I can put some convocation on, I wanted to really set the scene of my character and how he feels about his life. The monologue that I came up with was:
A clown, What a joke, what's the point in being a clown if nobody notices you
NOBODY
That's the story of my life, nobody ever notices me, never
Not even my parents, one day I went to work
and when I came home......they had moved
This is simple but tells the audience about my character and his background and how he is treated. Now that I have the full act ready I will just spend the rest my rehearsal days, running my act a few times a day to get the flow of it going and having that security of knowing it back to front.
Costume and Make-up Designs
I have tried to stay away from some of the typical clown costumes, I have looked at some of the traditional clowns and comedy actors, like Charlie Chaplin. I liked his basic makeup and his costume how it was simple and looked a bit scruffy.
This is the design for my costume. I have got a tail coat, and I will sew patches onto my trousers to make me look a bit worse for wear and bit disappointing. I think that the splash of colour with the red tie and flower make him seem that he is making an effort but it just doesn't look right.
This is makeup design. I have looked into Charlie Chaplin, and how he used simple makeup to show an emotion. I think that the black under my eyes will give a negative feel to my eyes and make them seem sad and big.
The Venue
I will be performing my act in the Sealight Theatre, and the audience will be sat end on to the stage. This works really well for my act as they will be right in front of me, so I can interact with them and direct all of my feeling towards them and pin point some of the lines to the audience. If I could have picked any venue I think this one would have been one of the best for my acts. As it doesn't seat to many and I can keep it very intimate.






